People say that a country will benefit greatly if students study abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present world, many students are finding an opportunity for them to be able to

study

abroad which many adults think that by

this

reason will considerably benefit the

country

. From my point of view, it

is agree

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that students that went to

study

aboard

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abroad

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will surely benefit the

country

. In the following paragraph, the reasons to support my opinion will

be out discuss

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more

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on

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detail.

Firstly

, most of the

student

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students

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that went to

study

aboard

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abroad

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will be able to learn

a

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their

second

or

third

language depending on

country

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the country

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they have gone to.

For instance

, in my

country

, Thailand, many

student

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students

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are planning to go

in

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to

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an English speaking

country

. According to

this

, they will surely improve their

english

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skill and obtain an opportunity to learn with native

english

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speaker

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speakers

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.

Moreover

, if they are planning to go

for

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to

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country

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a country

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such

as China, they will be able to learn their

third

language, Chinese which is very important now as China are one of the powerful

country

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countries

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in term of business. These

benefit

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will surely improve the opportunity to export or import for the

country

as they are able to communicate with

other

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another country

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country

.

In addition

,

student

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a student

the student

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that

are

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able to learn

at

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in

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other

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another country

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country

will expand their mindset

further

especially when they went to

the

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country

such

as England or America as

their

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are

people

from

many

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any

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nationality

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nationalities

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.

This

will help the

student

to learn how to handle

people

with

different

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aspect

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.

Therefore

,

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a student

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student

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students

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that

have

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been to

study

aboard

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abroad

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will understand the nature of

people

from different countries and be able to communicate

for

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apply

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effectively when doing business. In conclusion, I agree with the point of view that

student

study

abroard

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abroad

will enhance the

country

further

as it seems to be that

by

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knowing

language

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the language

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and

understand

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people

from different

nationality

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nationalities

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will help the

country

to move forward easier.