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People say that a country will benefit greatly if students study abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the present world, many students are finding an opportunity for them to be able to
study
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 abroad which many adults think that by
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 reason will considerably benefit the
country
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. From my point of view, it
is agree
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 that students that went to
study
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aboard
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abroad
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 will surely benefit the
country
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. In the following paragraph, the reasons to support my opinion will
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more
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on
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 detail.
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, most of the
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student
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students
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 that went to
study
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aboard
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abroad
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 will be able to learn
a
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their
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 or
third
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 language depending on
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country
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the country
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 they have gone to.
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, in my
country
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, Thailand, many
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student
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students
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 are planning to go
in
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to
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 an English speaking
country
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. According to
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, they will surely improve their
english
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English
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 skill and obtain an opportunity to learn with native
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speaker
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speakers
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.
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, if they are planning to go
for
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country
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a country
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such
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 as China, they will be able to learn their
third
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 language, Chinese which is very important now as China are one of the powerful
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country
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countries
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 in term of business. These
benefit
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 will surely improve the opportunity to export or import for the
country
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 as they are able to communicate with
other
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another country
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country
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.
In addition
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,
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student
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a student
the student
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 that
are
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 able to learn
at
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in
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other
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another country
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country
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 will expand their mindset
further
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 especially when they went to
the
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a
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country
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such
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 as England or America as
their
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 are
people
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 from
many
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any
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nationality
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nationalities
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.
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 will help the
student
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 to learn how to handle
people
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 with
different
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a different
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aspect
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.
Therefore
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,
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a student
the student
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student
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students
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 that
have
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 been to
study
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aboard
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abroad
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 will understand the nature of
people
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 from different countries and be able to communicate
for
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effectively when doing business. In conclusion, I agree with the point of view that
student
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study
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abroard
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abroad
 will enhance the
country
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further
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 as it seems to be that
by
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apply
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knowing
language
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the language
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 and
understand
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people
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 from different
nationality
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nationalities
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 will help the
country
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 to move forward easier.

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