Some educationalists say a child should be taught to play a musical instrument. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It seems that you are missing a verb. Consider adding it.
The indefinite article a may not be required with the plural noun instruments in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.
The verb taught after the modal verb can does not appear to be in the correct form. Consider changing the verb form.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction that. Consider removing the comma.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase in parties. Consider adding a comma.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction that. Consider removing the comma.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma before the dependent clause marker because. Consider removing the comma.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It seems that determiner use may be incorrect here.
The verb taught after the modal verb should does not appear to be in the correct form. Consider changing the verb form.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.