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You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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 to the advertisement given in the newspaper for a role in the Post office. I believe I am qualified to apply for the open clerical positions. I am O Raga Sai Nithisha; I have a bachelor's degree in information technology and a master's degree in finance and accounting. For two years, I worked as a trainee clerk for 'Alpha Serene,' a multi-level marketing firm. I intend to pursue a post-graduate degree in either finance or accounting
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 and working in
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 field during my vacations would broaden my career options. If I am chosen, I believe
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 temporary position in the city post office will be a real blessing for me because I want to work somewhere close to home. The optimal age range for
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employment, according to the advertisement, is 22 to 25, yet I am just 24. As a young and eager employee, I can provide my services, and I believe the experience I acquire from an institution like
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 is well worth it. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Obbu Raga Sai Nithisha
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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