Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. what are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

This
is always a heated debate about whether
parents
should buy a massive
number
of
toys
for their
children
or not. Some people believe that
children
will obtain advantages through playing the
toys
.
however
, some people think that there are some negative effects for
children
who play with a large
number
of
toys
. In
this
essay, I will discuss both points of view and give an example in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, some
parents
tend to purchase a large
number
of
toys
for their
children
, because they want to earn attention from their
children
.
For example
,
children
are sensitive to the colourful
toy
,
therefore
parents
will grab the colourful
toy
in front of them to attract their concentration.
Moreover
, some
parents
think that the
toys
can be a good friend accompany with their childhood,
therefore
they buy a lot of
toys
for their
children
then
they won't feel boring anymore.
In contrast
, some experts believe there are negative impacts for
children
who hold a massive
number
of
toys
.
First
of all,
children
do not know how to control their desire, because their
parents
will buy whatever
toys
they want , and by following up
this
pattern,
children
will no longer feel thankful through the
toys
which they already have .
For example
, it is easy to see that a kid asks for a new
toy
from their
parent
,
although
they have many
toys
in their home already, and the
parent
will purchase the new
toy
for their kid in the end. In conclusion, I believe that
parent
has the responsibility to educate their
children
. The
parent
can buy the
first
new
toy
for their
children
and teach them if they want a new
toy
, they need to earn it by doing a good performance.
That is
to say, there is nothing
that is
free in the world, everything needs to be gained by sort of paybacks.
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