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Some people think international news is more important while some think local news is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #news #think
we can see that the overall
trend
 is that there is a moderate and rapid
increase
number
 of
humans
 which went to the capital
city
 in other
country
 due to
four
 main
reasons
:
employment
,
study
, family and
friends
,
adventure
. we can see that the overall
trend
 is that there is a moderate and rapid
increase
number
 of
humans
 which went to the capital
city
 in other
country
 due to
four
 main
reasons
:
employment
,
study
, family and
friends
,
adventure
. we can see that the overall
trend
 is that there is a moderate and rapid
increase
number
 of
humans
 which went to the capital
city
 in other
country
 due to
four
 main
reasons
:
employment
,
study
, family and
friends
,
adventure
. we can see that the overall
trend
 is that there is a moderate and rapid
increase
number
 of
humans
 which went to the capital
city
 in other
country
 due to
four
 main
reasons
:
employment
,
study
, family and
friends
,
adventure
.
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