Many people say that they believe it is important to protect the environment but make no effort to do anything about it themselves. Why do you think this is the case? What action do you think individuals should take to protect the environment?

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countless information on global warming but giving

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about it is a tiring and long process. For

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reason, only a few

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are integrated to act for their environment. In fact, there are several methods we can do to contribute to

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. Recently, green movement communities are spreading around the world. They share some pieces

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information about

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earth's condition related to global warming and some methods that we can do to tackle

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problem.

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account called Siklus which actually is a commercial brand for refilling detergent, shampoo, or dish soap. Unfortunately, knowing those information does not the same as taking

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for it.

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tend to live an easy life and it somehow let us procrastinate.

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, giving effort about Green Movement is a difficult activity.

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, using public transportation in Jakarta is not convenient for most of its citizens and it gives them permission to ride their

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, even if

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, it does not give an instant result and it affects some individuals to give up during their process. In order to join the green movement, I personally think

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can start to live with

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formula. LESS formula is some

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we do less than usual.

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, we acknowledge that recycling plastic is inconvenient,

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we need to use plastic less than we usually do.

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. In summary, acknowledging our environment's problem should make us aware and do something about it. Our effort should not be a great one, we can start from small yet consistent

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Many people say that they believe it is important to protect the environment but make no effort to do anything about it themselves. Why do you think this is the case? What action do you think individuals should take to protect the environment?

Your opinion

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Olders after retirement spend money on themselves for travels or holidays rather than for their children. Is this positive or negative development

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

A friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Offer to find somewhere to stay •Advise about what to do •Give information about what clothes to bring