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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate how Grange
Park
, which is adjacent to Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street, has developed since 1920. Overall, it is apparent that the
park
 has been dramatically transformed over the given period. There have been significant changes to the entertainment area and a few new facilities have been built.
To begin
 with,
initially
, in the
center
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 of the
park
 there was a stage for musicians and a fountain but the former was upgraded to an
amphitheater
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 with increased capacity to accommodate more people, and the latter was replaced by the rose garden, consolidating the gardens which were earlier located in the bottom left and top right area of the
park
.
Moreover
, the seats that were earlier on all sides of the
park
 were moved
next
 to the garden, shortening the distance between them and the entrances.
Furthermore
, a café was constructed in the place of the rose garden which was
next
 to the Arnold Avenue entrance, and the water plant pond which was adjacent to it was transformed into a children’s play area.
Besides
, the glasshouse was replaced by a water feature and a car
park
 on the ground below it.
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