Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some schools of thought believe that
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should be considered
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of the most valuable school courses, while others are of the opinion that
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and
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be given more relevance.
This
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essay agrees with the latter view that
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and
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be prioritized above
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or related courses and it helps drive the economy forward by contributing to a country's development. The essay will discuss both views. On the
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hand,
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as a subject, help
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to appreciate
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's ancestral background better by fortifying
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with up-to-date information relating to
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's
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.
As a result
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of
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,
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is better informed about
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's culture and traditions and feels a sense of belonging.
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,
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can
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appreciate the efforts of the past heroes who had made a significant contribution toward
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's racial liberalization and or freedom.
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, in Nigeria, the
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of our past nationalists in achieving our independence as a nation is well appreciated by consulting records from documented histories.
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, we are
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able to see
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another as
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great nation that had gone through a hard struggle to attain independent existence.
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;
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and
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as a subject of study; have contributed immensely to our development as a nation than any
history
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course. Owing to its contribution to almost all aspects of human
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: agriculture, transportation, medicine, and even commerce; it has helped to positively drive the economy in the forward direction.
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, productivity has dramatically improved especially with the development of mechanized farming, rather than the subsistent farming of the old which relied solely on
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farming techniques. In conclusion; though,
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is important as a subject because it helps
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to value
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's ancestral background and appreciate our forefathers; I believe that
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and
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should still be considered more valuable, due to
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immense contribution to all aspects of human life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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