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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development

#advertisements #life #development
There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the merits and demerits of
advertisements
 ubiquitous in everyday life .Obviously,
this
 essay is devoted to analyzing both sides, followed by parallel justification.
However
, I would contend that its downsides may outweigh its upsides. Without a shadow of
doubt
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, there is considerable clear evidence about the tremendous benefits of
advertisements
. Not only does it help the companies draw their
products
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product's
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 attention to the customers, but
also
 creates a high reputation
to
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people
 about
the
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things via technological media .
For instance
, the fashion brands
such
 as Zara, H&M create a wealth of advertisement campaigns to promote their clothes collections. Apparently, that puts an immense impact on the customer, through those images , videos,
people
 may get more acknowledgement about the products
such
 as their price, their quality and style of
collection
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 and they will have multiple choices of shopping. The more
advertisements
 the enterprises show
,
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 the higher percentage of consumption they get. In my point of view, the promotions do wonders for both customers and business. While the redeeming features of
advertisements
 are widely acknowledged, it is unfair if its drawbacks are ignored. With a drastic increase in technology devices, advertising is easier for everyone. There is a wealth of
low quality
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 products promoted
widenly
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widely
 on social media
such
 as Facebook, Instagram, Tiktok, which leads to plenty of alarming conditions .Remarkably is the cream named mixed-cream,which is unknown origin and ingredient, can be cited as an outstanding instance. Despite its latent serious dangers
such
 as bad skin
condition
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, or health
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, it still widely sells because of its high coverage advertising effect. That leads to a counterpart of the advertisement industry on
people
, who have strong trust
on
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 promotion.
Thus
, untruly promotion can cause a great deal of urgent impact on customers. In conclusion, while the advantage of advertisement is proved
crealy
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really
creamy
real
, it still does great damage to
people
 because of its counterpart mentioned.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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