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The diagram illustrates the processing of
milk
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 and the production of
dairy
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 products for commercial sale. Overall, there are several processes for
milk
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 production before going to the
dairy
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 products at the
last
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 process. Beginning with the milking machine is collected
milk
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 from the cows. Meanwhile, they are distributed all of the
dairy
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 products to the commercial stores at the final stage. In the
first
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 stage, raw
milk
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 will collect by a milking machine twice a day.
Next
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, all of them will transfer to the refrigeration storage for keeping
milk
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 at a cool temperature. After that, they have filled the
milk
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 into a
milk
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 tanker and deliver them to the
dairy
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 by truck every day. The following process is that all of the
milk
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 is kept in
dairy
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 which can produce cheese, cream, and butter in
this
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 stage. Another product from
dairy
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 will be
milk
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. They are transferred
milk
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 to pasteurizing and packing them before distributing to the supermarkets and shops at the final process.
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