Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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with, the predominant reason to swell the price of petrol is as the fuel is a basic need for all type of the

vehicles

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people

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will not stop buying petrol if they need, their cars

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as

people

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still have to commute to work and live their life.

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type of concept will definitely

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not help to reduce the

traffic

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over the cities and

pollution

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.

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, nowadays, most

people

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have four-wheelers as they plan many journeys which are not required.

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this

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type of commute will elaborate the

pollution

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,

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will be handled by increasing the cost.

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, with

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, change

people

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are using the sharing of transportation to reach their job place, as in the past all commute by their own

vehicles

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.

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, there are certain other ways which help to solve the

traffic

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and

pollution

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issues. The

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way is that the government should start the public transport which provides comfort and helps to maintain their budget.

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will help to reduce the number of

vehicles

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over the road.

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, another way is the authority should start the awareness program car sharing on the road which shows the detrimental effect of the

pollution

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with

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can change

people

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using the sharing of transportation to reach their job place, as in the past all commute by their own

vehicles

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. Due to

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people

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are avoiding private

vehicles

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; which reduce the

traffic

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and

pollution

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.

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, in Singapore,

people

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are using public transport, as having more facilities and availabilities;

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reduces the

traffic

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on the street and

pollution

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. In conclusion,

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the congestion on the road and

pollution

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would be controlled by the rising price of fuel. Even by providing better public service and ,

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these issues will be handled by the authority.