Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

To begin

with, the predominant reason to swell the price of petrol is as the fuel is a basic need for all type of the

vehicles

people

will not stop buying petrol if they need, their cars

such

as

people

still have to commute to work and live their life.

This

type of concept will definitely

will

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not help to reduce the

traffic

over the cities and

pollution

.

Moreover

, nowadays, most

people

have four-wheelers as they plan many journeys which are not required.

Although

this

type of commute will elaborate the

pollution

,

this

will be handled by increasing the cost.

For example

, with

this

, change

people

are using the sharing of transportation to reach their job place, as in the past all commute by their own

vehicles

.

On the other hand

, there are certain other ways which help to solve the

traffic

and

pollution

issues. The

first

way is that the government should start the public transport which provides comfort and helps to maintain their budget.

This

will help to reduce the number of

vehicles

over the road.

Furthermore

, another way is the authority should start the awareness program car sharing on the road which shows the detrimental effect of the

pollution

with

this

can change

people

using the sharing of transportation to reach their job place, as in the past all commute by their own

vehicles

. Due to

this

people

are avoiding private

vehicles

; which reduce the

traffic

and

pollution

.

For instance

, in Singapore,

people

are using public transport, as having more facilities and availabilities;

this

reduces the

traffic

on the street and

pollution

. In conclusion,

although

the congestion on the road and

pollution

would be controlled by the rising price of fuel. Even by providing better public service and ,

awareness

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these issues will be handled by the authority.