Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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Rising the cost of gasoline is the most effective method to deal with suffering from increased
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and
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. I completely disagree with
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statement is to stop population purchasing petrol if they need their cars.
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, there can be taken measures in order to improve public transportation and car-sharing.
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with, the predominant reason to swell the price of petrol is as the fuel is a basic need for all type of the transport
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will not stop buying petrol if they need their cars
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as
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still have to commute to work and live their life.
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will definitely not help to reduce the
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over the cities and
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.
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, nowadays, most
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have four-wheelers as they plan many journeys which are not required.
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type of commute will elaborate the infection,
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will be handled by increasing the cost.
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, with
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, change
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are using the sharing of transportation to reach their job place, as in the past all commute by their own vehicles.
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, there are certain other ways which help to solve the
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and
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issues. The
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way is that the government should start the public transport which provides comfort and helps to maintain their budget.
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will help to reduce the number of movements over the road.
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, another way is the authority should start the awareness program car sharing on the road which shows the detrimental effect of the
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with
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can change
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using the sharing of transportation to reach their job place, as in the past all commute by their own vehicles. Due to
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people
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are avoiding private vehicles; which reduce the
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and
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.
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, in Singapore,
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are using public transport, as having more facilities and availabilities;
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reduces the
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on the street and
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. In conclusion,
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the congestion on the road and
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would be controlled by the rising price of fuel. Even by providing better public service and ,
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these issues will be handled by the authority.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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