The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, taking personal
information
from their users is common in
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internet
companies
and organizations. In my opinion, there are several disadvantages as compared to advantages. I will examine both perspectives in
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paragraphs. To commence with, the
information
taken by internet
companies
is helpful for providing services to the people
such
as showing products of their interest.
In addition
to
this
,
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information
about an individual on
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website is used for
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by
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. In which, an organisation tends to know about working of their systems by tracing liking and disliking from users.
For example
, Instagram is collecting reports about their reel feature by asking a questionary. On the
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other
hand, there are many advantages of taking
information
by internet organizations.
Firstly
, as we know, technology is increasing, many people tend to collect personal
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data
from
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through hacking which are used in crimes on online platforms. Because of
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a person is in that situation losing their personal
information
and involved in crime.
Secondly
, lots of issues have arrived due to many
companies
can not make sure that their customer's
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are safe.
As a result
, several individuals are relieving
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unknown
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massage from fraud
companies
and
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for money by giving attacked policies. In conclusion, despite
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having services and research
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by websites, collecting
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personal information
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information
is having several drawbacks which put
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situation. Because of
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pieces
of
information
, a person has to suffer from a huge loss in his or her life.
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