Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is true that
adults
are not nearly as successful as
children
in learning new languages. Personally, I completely agree that
children
learn foreign languages during their childhood.
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contemporary society, there have been widespread discussions about
children
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generally more successful in foreign
language
studies than
adults
and various arguments have been put forward Indeed
such
debates have sometimes resulted in acrimonious or rancorous
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. Whilst a large number of advocates may strenuously argue that
children
learn
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language
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quickly than
adults
. Their adversaries may claim
otherwise
considering numerous arguments made. I would strongly to some extent hold that my opinion, I agree that
children
learn
language
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to learn
language
than
adults
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • neuroplasticity
  • critical period
  • language acquisition
  • linguistic proficiency
  • phonetic articulation
  • bilingualism
  • multilingual
  • immersion
  • pedagogy
  • pronunciation
  • sociolinguistics
  • accent reduction
  • retention
  • cultural assimilation
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