Task 2 Some educationalists say a child should be taught to play a musical instrument. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, music is one of the important
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in most
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lives. And, of course, not a few people want to learn how to play musical
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. So, to be honest, I
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with that point. Well, In my opinion, playing
music
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instruments
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can help
children
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to find their way. But, at
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, I think, parents should ask their child about what kind of musical
instruments
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do they prefer. And,
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, do they want it, do they want to teach to play
instruments
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. I suppose, there are a lot of good sides.
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, one of them, play musical
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make
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creative, artistic, which in the future for sure can be one of their benefits.
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, there are
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some drawbacks. Not all
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children
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wants to teach it. Several of them hate it, cannot stand it. Else, we cannot skip that some
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parents
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compel their
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to teach to play. And it may
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in their life. Or,
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, there are
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who in
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obsessed with it. They cannot imagine their life without music. And it
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in their mind. Quite a few do not have
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for
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, and cause of it they can suffer. In conclusion, I want to say that, yes,
children
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should be taught, but if they want it. Because compulsion
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lead to deplorable conditions.
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