some people think that traditional culture can be destroyed by using it as money-making attractions to tourists. However, others believe that it is the only way to save our traditions. Discuss both the views and give your opinion?

some people think that traditional

culture

can be destroyed by using it as money-making attractions to

tourists

.

However

, others believe that it is the only way to save traditions. discuss both the views and give our opinion? Nowadays,

tradition

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cultures are

modefing

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modelling

modified

to attract

tourists

. Some people think that, if

tourism

may affect our traditional

culture

by using it

as

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for

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economic

purpose

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purposes

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. While

other

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others

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suggest that, it will help to protect the souvenirs. In

this

essay, will discuss both views with my opinion. On the one hand,

tourism

is developing each day, it has

great

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a great

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economic impact. It is the backbone

our

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of our

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countries

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country's

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economy. It helps to spread our

culture

towards other

foriegn

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foreign

countries.

Furthermore

,

tourism

help

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to develop our arts

,

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apply

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and

motivating

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the artisans.

Hence

, it will help to enhance our traditions and

also

the economy.

In addition

, every

industries

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industry

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are trying to attract tourist.

For instance

, the resorts are well

modiefied

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modified

it

attract

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attracts

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tourists

. And

also

, food

industr

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industry

are making varieties of food to make

stastify

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satisfy

the

tourists

. Special transport systems are arranged for

tourists

.

For example

, horse ride, elephant ride, camel ride.

On the other hand

, if

tourism

concentrating

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only

for

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on

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money making

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, it may affect the cultural background. And

also

lack of proper guidance may insult our

tradition

.

For instance

, some

tourists

using shoes inside the holy place

it

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apply

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will affect the

culture

and feeling of

localty

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locality

loyalty

local

people.

Moreover

, renewing the cultural places to attract

tourist

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tourists

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may affect the original features. But the

culture

is

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deep-rooted

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deep

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deeply

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rooted nothing can destroy it. In my opinion,

the

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apply

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tourists

boost our economy.

By

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proper

guidance

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we can keep our

tradition

safe. I strongly believe

taht

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that

tourists

never take any

tradition

or

culture

from the country. In conclusion, it is

neccessary

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necessary

to attract the tourist.

By

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proper guidance,

maintence

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maintenance

we can have better benefits from

tourism