The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. on the other hand,it also isolatesus and encourage people not to socialise

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connects us with our distant loved ones. The
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helps us communicate with our cronies in other countries. On the
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we become aware of new information that we do not know.
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, we can search for the books that we need. The
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deceives people by spreading false news. Some youngs misuse the
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. For ,instance they use the
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to play games. They watch videos, they should not be watching. Thanks to the
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Young people are becoming less active. So we need to use the
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properly. The proper use of the
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is in our hands. In conclusion, I completely agree that,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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