Some people think that governments should do more to make their citizens have a healthier diet. Others, however, believe that individuals should take responsibility for their own diet and health. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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issue caused by

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has raised many people’s concerns in recent years. There’re voices asserting that officials are obligated to take a more active stance on

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problem

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, and others believe that

health

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should be held accountable on an individual level. Governments across the world have often established

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made specifically for

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health

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, WHO, FDA, China’s NMPA whose duty include

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a scientific solution on

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intakes

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.

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, the way they method

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approach their goal of domestic

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is by making

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and commercials, which are somewhere viable, but criticized for not being effective shown

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constantly climbing obesity rate annually. Those who argued it is a personal problem all along, after all, most of the negative outcome lies on

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. Said “My body my temple”, indeed, the maintenances of the temple are monks’ work, not whatever god they believe in. But in a realistic standpoint, individuals aren’t all known all reasoningsaints, they don’t know what is the best for them, the choices they make are suboptimum on a regular basis. Personally,

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solution isn’t advisable. My personal view is that since both methodologies are not repelled, they should be done mutually. Neglectbymostpeople, another aspect that could make the most significant impact is parenting.

Unhealthy

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diet

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leads to obesity are frequently caused by a harmful relationship with

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.

Food

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is a

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mechanism repeatedly brought to the table(pun intended) in lazy and irresponsible parenting style, if so, children

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could form

an unhealthy relationship with

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as a result

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. Once

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food

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the food

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is used for

coping

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, it lost its function as nutrient intake,

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to

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a gateway to

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spiral,

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obesity. It has to be asserted that in order to achieve a healthier

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for demography, both government and individual effort are required,

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, parenting cannot be overlooked.