Shopping habits depend more on your age group than anything else. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that

people

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in different age ranges represent different purchasing practices.

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agree

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with

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statement. I believe that

younger

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the younger

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generation

tend

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tends

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to spend more

money

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on shopping than the older generation,

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because life standard

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gotten higher and mainstream media increasingly pushing their consuming agenda. Younger generations live wealthier with more choices for

entertaiment

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entertainment

and shopping available than there were in their

parents

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grandparents’s

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time. There are more

bussinesses

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businesses

right now than ever in the world , the economic and living standard

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improved compared to the past. More

money

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is to be made and spent

nowsday

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nowadays

thanks to the incorporation of global

bussiness

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business

partnerships between countries. A recent report in

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Euro up

estimated a

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percent

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rise in

money

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spending among the youth compared to a

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mere

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thirty

percent

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per cent

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increase in the older age groups. The

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of social media and television usage in

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modern

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days

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have changed

people

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’s

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lifestyle

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life style

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lifestyle

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. We are being surrounded by constant

advertisments

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

325 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

preferences
financial capacities
technological savviness
online platforms
traditional in-store shopping
marketing and advertising
susceptible to trends
generational values
environmental awareness
sustainable and ethical shopping
value for money
product longevity
cultural background
income levels
personal interests

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Shopping habits depend more on your age group than anything else. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory