It is generally observed that almost all high level jobs are done by men.Does it mean that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be observed for women? Do you agree or disagree with this proposition?

Many believe that majority of the senior positions are held by

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percentage of

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be observed for women. In my opinion, I

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disagree

that a percentage of

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observed for women, and the

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my

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given below. The main reason is that

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towardsdiscrimination

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towards discrimination

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. In certain countries,

such

as Sri Lanka, particular Governments post, eg. Secretary of female Affairs is set

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for

of

a woman, and

men

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from applying to the post,

this

is gender discrimination.

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segregation

should not be allowed as it is unfair to

men

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, some

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can only be performed by

men

. It is proven by both medical studies and

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physiological

psychological

studies,

jobs

such

as Head of Armed forces can only be

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successfully

performed by

men

only.

Therefore

, having

resstrictions

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restrictions

to

such

positions may become an invalid action.

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the job must be appointed, and it should not be a matter of

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gender. For an instance, Heinze Company 'a the current Chief Executive Officer is a female, a position that was formally held by a man. As

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it allows the

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company to benefit from the bast leadership.

Therefore

, gender should not be deciding factor in occupying a senior post. In conclusion, I disagree that there should be a percentage observed for

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women

in senior levels, because, it is

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discriminatory

towards

men

, it

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the best person for the job and

last

but not least, certain

jobs

can only be performed by

men

.