‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?

Charity

is generosity and

voluntarily

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aid especially toward the needy or suffering. It is often said that all citizens should contribute to society the settled amount of their

income

. It seems to me that donation is not in fact

that

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giving fixed

income

, and I will explain why in

this

essay.

Firstly

, contributors may have different way of life situations and job positions.

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means that no matter how much we might admire the idea,

this

is

impractical

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aspiration. It

is not clearly see

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that everybody can pay

the

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certain amount of donation to support charitable

institution

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institutions

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.

This

affects their financial resources.

Second

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negative factor is

whole

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question of prejudice. By

this

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we mean that donation must be

voluntarily

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with pleasure and without being asked some

especial

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requirements. If it is forced and

required

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some specific condition, it may not

charitable

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giving. There is plenty of

way

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to support

charity

instead

of

income

.

For example

: we may

can

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give warm clothes for winter time, books, toys and furniture which can often bring

smile

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on

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recipients. It is true that there are some positives to cash

charity

.

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may

fulfils

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recipient’s

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a

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need that

what

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they target most. Despite

this

, it would appear that

expected

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sponsor’s earnings do not resolve all related demanding situations.

To conclude

,

this

suffers significantly when confronted with

contributor’s

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contributors’

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diverse

income

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incomes

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, levels of career, and prejudice

of

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charity

.

This

can together to make

this

aspiration difficult and problematic.