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Question: Some people today believe that the world increases in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society -Discuss both these views and give your opinion

#people #world #increases #population #crisis #growth #world’s #economy #society #-discuss
Population
increase
 is a major problem indeed.
A massive
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 consumption of foods and fuels lead to
global
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 crisis.
People
 make major of trash every day
that is
resources
 waste.But
coin
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 has two sides,
population
increase
 has a positive impact
for
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 the
economy
 and society.
People
 provides
a
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human resource and technical can push
global
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economy
. In my
opinion
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 I believe that
population
increase
 is indeed and gain of the world’s
economy
 and society as long as
people
who
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know how to correctly
to
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use
resources
. Some
people
 say the
population
increase
that
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will lead to
global
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 crisis
finally
.
People
 severe damage to the earth’s
resources
, Many
business
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 keep hunting the woods for building that influence some forest were disappeared, it
make
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 animals lost their shelter. So we should think about how to change the living habits to reduce
resources
 consumption,
for example
, recycling is a good way to
safe
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 that’s
problem
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a problem
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 and easy to do.
Population
increase
 is the benefit to provide human
resources
 which can rise up the
economy
. A good economic system
supported
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 by the three main industries there
are
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 farming industry,
financial
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 industry and
manufacturing
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 industry which both need humans.
People
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 life is fixable so
people
has
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 to keep the birth rate for
population
 balance. In a concussion, we can through education
to
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teach
people
reduce
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 the resource used, it can be
soft
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 crisis global.
People
also
 can
be invent
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 some new fuels to support daily use and keep the good rising for
economy
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the economy
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.
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