Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

In choosing the course, Master of Education;
firstly
because of Thai educational system required an enhancement
such
outdated teaching methods
such
as corporal punishment or even more tragically with poverty that have to
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in public school that sponsored by the government as cheapest in learning fees will certainly learn in the Thai wording.
Accordingly
, Thailand's
English
proficiency ranges have decreased consecutively for the
last
three years as I am one of them who pursued
English
from myself. Even though it is necessary for children, Thailand hasn’t yet found and utilized a useful process to engage with their learning experiences. Apart from that, being a teacher has always been my dream. I have been working as an
English
tutor who teaches Math and
English
grammatically and conversationally to students, whether primary, secondary, to undergraduate students, voluntarily and as a freelance job as individual online and home learning for over three years since I was a
first
-year in Business
English
majoring at Bangkok University International to supporting my living and tuition fees.
Therefore
, a Master of Education degree, whether partly related to Developmental Psychology, is what I believe can push me to the goals by advancing my teaching skill and
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. I
also
think that productive learning is somewhat connected to interpersonal difficulties. The degree will carry out the most proficient procedures to manage the class and engage students better.
Furthermore
, improving my leadership skill allows me to be a school administrator or an excellent discipline analyst responsible for operating the educational process effectually at some public schools or institutions from the international standards perspective of Australian education. With the position, I can give voluntariness to the unaccessible children to good pieces of knowledge and ability; in a big sector to heighten the socio-economic in Thailand—providing them with the standardized learning to get them out of privation practically which starting with the
English
language that can open their world to an infinite path of knowledge exists worldwide. In Thailand, poverties struggle to seek a job with sufficient salary to raise their family well while that required a universal language, at the same time have never been offered especially those studying public schools; not only poverty villages in urban areas like my residential address, the rural regions
such
as my father’s and mother’s hometowns in Khon Kean and Yasothorn, I have experienced throughout life, need a big improvement.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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