WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans illustrate the significant changes in the landscape and the development that had taken place at
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Grange
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park
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between the first year in 1920 and today.
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, it can be seen that the
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park
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retains the
basis
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elements of flowers,
water
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, seating and music, with the addition of
cafe
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and a children’s play
area
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today. looking at the first plan of
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park
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, it was opened in 1920.
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area
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was between Arnold Avenue on the north
side
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and Eldon
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on the south
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. that there were
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entrances for the convenience of crossing in these two sections. There were
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five seat
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areas around
this
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park
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. Especially, The middle of
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had
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wonderful fountain.
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, the stage for musicians was located
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the west of the fountain, the pond for
water
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plants
yos
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was
on the northeast
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, and the glasshouse was on the southwest
side
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. Other beautiful areas were the rose gardens near the seats. Today, there are many changes
of
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facilities and beautiful
place
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in
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. The seats are changed
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position that they surround
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all four sides of the big rose garden, which used to be a fountain in the past.
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, the rose garden near the Amphitheater for concerts is
sill
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on
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the same position as in 1920, and another rose garden
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in
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the northeast
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is renovated to be
cafe
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.
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, there are
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areas for teenagers and children
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they
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are Amphitheater for concerts and
children's
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play
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, which
are
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used to be the stage for musicians and the pond for
water
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plants.
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, the glasshouse is changed to be the
water
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feature and the
park
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has
also
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additional entrance underground car
park
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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