Mrs Barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available Write at least 150 wrods. You do not need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Naomi Umami. I am writing to apply for the position you advertised in Kyoto City newspaper, 3rd March 2022. I believe that my qualifications and personality will make me a perfect candidate for the job. I am currently a student at Kyoto City University, majoring in undergraduate Business Administration, and will be graduating in 2024. I have experience of a part-time job as a cook at a hotel which is located near the Kyoto City Museum. I have gained communication skills, team working skills, and as well as time management skills, which I am sure will be helpful to take a part in your home. As there will be no classes during the summertime, I am looking for a temporary job. I will be able to help you with your daily chores and prepare some meals for you during the summer. My classes are usually held during the weekdays, so I will be available for an interview on the weekends. Please do not hesitate to contact me for
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information. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Naomi Umami
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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