As global trade increases, many goods, including those we use on a daily basis, are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distances. do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

As International
trade
has become virtual in the world,
products
can
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purchased
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from other
countries
by transport of long distances. In my opinion, I believe that the advantage is bigger than the disadvantage because it brings income of the
nation
and various
products
to
people
.
To begin
with, global
trade
has a minor demerit which is missing
products
by long-
distancedistance
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distance distance
transportation. As
products
transport form a
long distance
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nation
, plenty of
products
might need
transported
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to be transported
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by
devirst
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first
place in frequency, and
then
goods
be
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lost or broken.
For example
, my boss frequently buys bulk
products
from Korea, but there is always missing
goods
when he
received
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.
Therefore
,
products
being missing is a problem in
long distance
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transport.
On the other hand
, there are huge advantages that can supersede minor disadvantages.
Firstly
, it brings vast income
of
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the
nation
. When the
nation
generates
products
which fashion or popular, it exports to other
countries
can help
countries
have income and
also
allows nations to have an opportunity of job.
For instance
, China generate and export many
products
and
then
became a large exporter.
Moreover
, it allows
people
to use various
products
from other
countries
. Though global
trade
became commonly, we can buy foreign
goods
easily, which is some famous
goods
are produced in another country. But we still can buy from depart stores, so It will be convenient for
people
.
Thus
, nations can earn money and
people
can easy to buy
goods
from far away
countries
. To sum up, global
trade
creates more benefits than drawbacks, it helps
nation
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,
people
and
also
brings convenience to us.
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