As global trade increases, many goods, including those we use on a daily basis, are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distances. do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?
As International
trade
has become virtual in the world, products
can Change the verb form
be purchased
purchased
from other Change the form of the verb
purchase
countries
by transport of long distances. In my opinion, I believe that the advantage is bigger than the disadvantage because it brings income of the nation
and various products
to people
.
To begin
with, global trade
has a minor demerit which is missing products
by long-distancedistance
transportation. As Correct your spelling
distance distance
products
transport form a long distance
Add a hyphen
long-distance
nation
, plenty of products
might need transported
by Change the verb form
to be transported
transporting
devirst
place in frequency, and Correct your spelling
first
then
goods
be
lost or broken. Change the verb form
are
For example
, my boss frequently buys bulk products
from Korea, but there is always missing goods
when he received
. Correct pronoun usage
themreceived
Therefore
, products
being missing is a problem in long distance
transport.
Add a hyphen
long-distance
On the other hand
, there are huge advantages that can supersede minor disadvantages. Firstly
, it brings vast income of
the Change preposition
to
nation
. When the nation
generates products
which fashion or popular, it exports to other countries
can help countries
have income and also
allows nations to have an opportunity of job. For instance
, China generate and export many products
and then
became a large exporter. Moreover
, it allows people
to use various products
from other countries
. Though global trade
became commonly, we can buy foreign goods
easily, which is some famous goods
are produced in another country. But we still can buy from depart stores, so It will be convenient for people
. Thus
, nations can earn money and people
can easy to buy goods
from far away countries
.
To sum up, global trade
creates more benefits than drawbacks, it helps nation
, Fix the agreement mistake
nations
people
and also
brings convenience to us.Submitted by Nikky on
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