Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: · Explain the situation · Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date · Ask for a different date to present your thesis

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Ms Sujani, I'm writing to inform you that I will be unable to present my thesis

project

Use synonyms

on July 1st, and I respectfully request that you reschedule my presentation.

Firstly

Linking Words

, allow me to explain my issue. My sister resides in Spain and is getting married very soon. Her wedding will take place on the same day as my presentation. Attending her wedding with my family and friends is really important to me. If I would not attend her wedding, she would be depressed, and I do not want to make her sad on that important day. I hope you will have a favourable opinion of my circumstance. I've been working on my

project

Use synonyms

for two months now, and I've completed over 80% of it. I anticipate that

this

Linking Words

thesis

project

Use synonyms

will indeed be beneficial to all members of our team. To present my

project

Use synonyms

properly, I would like to move the presentation date from July 1st to June 18th. Please accept my sincere gratitude for your patience. Best Regards,

Nithisha

Correct your spelling

Natasha

pravleen97Tue Mar 15 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, an array of masses is living abroad for various reasons. However, they face many difficulties with speaking another language, and this brings crucial issues, whether social or practical. I strongly agree with this notion and in this essay, I will shed light on my viewpoints.
7
band
Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
One of the social concerns today relates to road safety. While it is commonly suggested that strict punishments for offences are the key to limiting the number of traffic accidents, others believe that there will be more effective measures to keep people safe while travelling on the streets. I’m going to discuss these opposing points of view. I myself strongly support the point of view of harsh punishment.
7
band
Some people say that advertising is extremely succesfull at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that advertising is very effective at influencing consumers' buying decisions, while others claim that it is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Although the internet has made advertising more common than ever before, I think it is still a powerful source of influence, which can affect people's desires.
7.5
band
On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: * Describe the item you lost * Explain how you lost it. * Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
I am writing this letter in connection with a laptop. I lost last weekend, which was under the travel insurance with your company.
7
band
Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organiasation. why might this be case what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed
These days, many individuals opt to work independently rather than work for a company or organization. They make this decision for various reasons. However, I believe that being self-employed could be disadvantageous in some aspects of life.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that advertising is extremely succesfull at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organiasation. why might this be case what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed