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As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

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Due to the increase in globalization, it has become a trend to import the
products
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 of daily usage from other
countries
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 even though these
products
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 have to travel longer
distances
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.
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 it has some advantages I believe
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 move of transporting the
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 from remote
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 have more disadvantages
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 as heavy transportation cost and obsolete of local
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. On the one hand, the
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 that are being transported from long
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 have some advantages. The main benefit is that people can buy the branded
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 locally, without travelling to the host
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. In
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 way, they can rely on those
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 because many people have used those
goods
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 internationally before arriving at international markets.
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, iPhone is the product of the USA but millions of consumers use that because of the reliability of the product. Another factor is that international trade can increase the revenue for host
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. They can export the
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 to those
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 that are not able to produce
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products
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 and generate excessive income.
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, transportation of
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 to longer
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 have several disadvantages.
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, the heavy incurred costs, resulting in costly
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 for other nations.
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, a t-shirt that costs PKR 1000 in Pakistan can cost up to 200 USD in the USA due to handling charges.
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, consumers can turn to foreign
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 which means obsolete local
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.
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, many local businesses have to shut their stores because of
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 trend which can increase the poverty in that country.
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, transportation of the perishable
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 to remote areas has to be done after freezing the subject
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.
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 could have negative effects on the health of the users. To conclude,
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 internationally transported
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 have some benefits I believe drawbacks outweighs the benefits. The overall impact on cost, local
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 and health cannot be ignored and it could even put more pressure on governments who rely heavily on global trade.
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