Your child's teacher has requested a meeting with you this Friday to discuss your child's low test scores. Unfortunately, you cannot attend. Write a letter to your child's teacher. In your letter · Describe why you cannot attend the meeting · Explain how you have been helping your child study · Propose another time to meet

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Arun, I'm writing to you about my child's low performance on a recent exam. Due to a presentation at a workplace formal meeting, I apologize for missing the scheduled consultation. My CEO called me on that specific day to invite me to a meeting to address the reasons for the company's poor sales performance in recent months;

otherwise

, he threatened to fire some of my salespeople.

As a result

, I didn't have a choice but to attend the meeting.

Furthermore

, I am aware of my child's grade, as she sits with me every evening to study after she completes her homework.

In addition

, I intend to employ a home tutor to help her with her schoolwork while I am away. If you don't have any other appointments on Thursday, my schedule is relatively open, and I can participate in the mandatory consultation. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely,

Nithisha

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Natasha

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