Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos invite them to come and stay with you

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Hello guys, I'm just writing to inform you that I received the photos from our vacation. Thank you so much for providing the images to me. They brought back wonderful memories of our time together in Malaysia. You have a wonderful country, and I thoroughly liked every moment of our journey, particularly when we went to Langkawi Island. I'm at a loss for words to express how grateful I am for everything. I apologise for not being able to write to you sooner. I had so many things left to accomplish when I returned to work after two weeks off that my employer forced me to finish them as soon as possible.

In addition

, I had to study for the final exam, which took a long time. Anyway, it's now your chance to come to my country. I'm willing to wager you've never visited a Latin American country. Because of the "June Carnival," if you come on the 5th of June, we'll have a blast. Brazil is known for having the best carnivals in the world.

Also

, don't worry about finding a place to stay because my flat has ample space for everyone. With love, Nithish

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

hospitality
memorable
appreciate
relive
extend an invitation
look forward to
highlight
attractions
comfortable
enjoyable
arrangements
conclude
warm message

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The Closing

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