Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

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As social media facebook launched in 2014 with many integrated features of chatting , posting pictures and allowing the expression to show around the globe.  As per the current ,scenario facebook has some negative impacts as well as positive impacts too. some actions are not in favour of individuals and society like polarization at the time of the election some massive destruction events spread via social media. These websites
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types of platforms make humans insensitive and vulnerable. Pupils are stuck to the screen 24/7, which cause harm to the mind, eyes and body due to insufficient movement. They are avoiding the mass gathering, events and parties which cause the inability to think out of the box and tackle the real-time problem. It is true that through these we are connected to an indefinite number of people, able to talk with anyone around the globe just with one click.
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platform should be used under proper restriction and guidelines, need to be a proper eye on the internet due to access to unrelative matters and content. I am always in favour of punishable offences for outrageous activity and publicity of
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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