You will be celebrating your son's 6 th birthday next week. you want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party.Write an invitation letter to this colleague.In your letter , invite your colleague to your son's birthday party,give details of the party and it's date and time , say how happy you and your family would be to have him/ her at the party.

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Dear Liz, I hope

this

letter finds you in better health.I am

also

boating from the same boat. The purpose of

this

writing is to invite you to my son's birthday party My son's name Vijay turning 6 years on

this

coming Sunday.We all family members organising a party for him.It is an enormous surprise for him.I really want your presence at

this

party. We are going to execute

this

on 24th March and the venue is Grand Hotel and timings are 8 pm to 11 pm.There will be a number of snacks and a cake ceremony will be done at 9 pm. we all will be delighted if you show your presence there.Every family member especially Vijay will be happy to meet you since they had not seen you for the

last

three years.

Moreover

, I will be overjoyed if you come with your family. I am eagerly waiting for the day ,See you there. Yours Sincerely, Jyoti

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