some people think that using animals for experimentation purpose is cruel, but other people think that it is necessary for the development of science. Discuss both view and your opinion.

The development of science has greatly involved the use of

experimentation

of

animals

. While

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some people, they might be against it, others believe

however

that is

for the good and benefit of mankind. In my opinion, the greater benefit lies ahead with the

experimentation

of these

animals

for our survival. Proponents of

this

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would say that these

animals

should have their right to life similar to human beings.

For example

, those who are animal lovers

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takes

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pride

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ensuring the safety, security and protection of these

animals

.

This

would explain by providing the habitat where they live and giving their necessary needs just like what we, humans, need in our daily lives, like food, water and a home to stay. With

this

, these

animals

will establish a harmonious relationship with their human protectors.

On the other hand

, those that opposed

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thinks that

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the

experimentation

would be of the benefit of humankind. Much of the works involving

animals

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are specifically designed for the production and manufacture of medicines for the treatment of diseases.

As a result

, these would mean a more valuable and longer life for us humans. In conclusion,

although

there are people who are against

this

experimentation

on

animals

, I believe that with these comes a great advantage

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the medical and health care industry.