Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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days, judging other's
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traditions
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and
personality
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personalities
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based on clothing is a common phenomenon.
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, I totally disagree with
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and foremost, it is impossible that clothing style can tell the detail of
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's culture and character.
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,
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of
people
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choose their dressing
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on the place, weather, and trend.As an
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, the public would love to wear
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dresses in summer rather than heavy dressing
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styles
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because
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the weather is very hot. What is more, it is clear that employees have to wear their uniforms
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of their liking. On the one hand,
character
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the character
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is not the thing that can be easily known with physical appearances.
People
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can find other's true
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colors
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based on their manners, mindset and skills. There is no doubt that
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people
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have to western clothing
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as suits and dresses according to a circumstance. Different cities have different traditions that have been created by their histories.
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, a choice of clothing is not able to judge the culture. To sum up, if clothing becomes the fact of
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judging
others, the comments will be definitely wrong.
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dressing code is important in
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society,
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phenomenon would be thoughtless.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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