Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older? Write 250 words.

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with no formal education. Why

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skill? because

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no general parenting patterns for

children

. Especially, because the

children

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spirit and free will.

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, when they are growing up, they can use their brain and

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to decided something, that they

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taught

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for them. So, as

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a parent

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parents

how to prepare our

children

with the best ability to help them in the

future? Some

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choose to show their endless love for

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children

by giving them everything they want. There is no strict rule for them

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because maybe the

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argue that

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will learn something from what they decided.

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, they put the wrong choice, they will know it and learn from that mistake.

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some

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who didn't want to make bad

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with their

children

. So that, they give complete freedom

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the

children

. In my

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opinion

this

type of parenting

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patterns

is not completely good. Because

children

need to be learned how to make

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best decision with all the capability we have.

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when we are in

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difficult situation and have limited resources,

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must be learned to be

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. While the

children

always get what they want, it might

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them become

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person

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. Overall,

parents

need to be the best example figure for their

children

. Even we love them unconditionally, but teach them about sharing, caring, patients, and struggling are very

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for them to have a good personality and be the best person in the future.

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they will be

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independent,

thoughtfull

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thoughtful

and bring

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happiness

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society.

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