You have been invited to attend an admissions interview for a prestigious college. Unfortunately, you cannot come at the proposed time due to a previous appointment. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. In your letter: Introduce yourself and state your interest in the program Apologize and offer to come at a different time Ask how long the interview will be and if you will have to take an exam

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Respected Sir, I'm writing to express my regret for not being able to make the scheduled interview. Because I had an excruciating toothache that required me to schedule an appointment with a dentist, I had to cancel our meeting. I transmit my apology for my awful health hazard which intersected with our meet up, so I would like to request you to consider another day or maybe I am ready after 3.00 pm today.

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like to know how long our interview will be and whether there will be any examinations,

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as written or computer-based. Will it be multiple choice questions or writing composition if it's any of them? If not, a panel level interview will be held; if so, how many panel members will be present? Is there a dress code that must be adhered to? I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible, and I appreciate your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Obbu Raga Sai Nithisha

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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