You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

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Dear Mr Red, I had to

pleassure

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pleasure

attending

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the meeting held on January 12th at the Ibis Hotel. The venue is good for parking, and the meeting room has offered us a nice thermal comfort. Unfortunately, I should tell you that there was no restaurant nearby for a respectful meal with our team from Campinas. The restaurants nearby were too small and had no

vegetarians

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options for lunchtime.

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, during the break, we had no tables in the group, and our pregnant co-worker was very uncomfortable due to not having a place to sit. I am very glad to suggest you share

this

information with the company responsible for the meeting organization. I would like to thank you for hosting the meeting so

niecly

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nicely

with your opening presentation. Best regards, Olga

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8 paragraphs

132 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think is postitive or negative situation?

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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home, and more children will study from home, as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this will be a positive or negative deuelopment?