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You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

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Dear Mr Red, I had to
pleassure
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pleasure
 to
attending
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attend
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 the meeting held on January 12th at the Ibis Hotel. The venue is good for parking, and the meeting room has offered us a nice thermal comfort. Unfortunately, I should tell you that there was no restaurant nearby for a respectful meal with our team from Campinas. The restaurants nearby were too small and had no
vegetarians
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vegetarian
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 options for lunchtime.
Also
, during the break, we had no tables in the group, and our pregnant co-worker was very uncomfortable due to not having a place to sit. I am very glad to suggest you share
this
 information with the company responsible for the meeting organization. I would like to thank you for hosting the meeting so
niecly
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nicely
 with your opening presentation. Best regards, Olga
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