Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Although
some parts of the community argue
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conducting scientific
studies
only limited to health-related
problems
, another group oppose
this
by suggesting research on other subjects. study on subjects like the solar system or new
energy
sources
are
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important to the evaluation of mankind but, to prevent its extinction from the earth ,
governments
should
be
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prioritised health-related
studies
.
To begin
with , since ancient times several health-related
problems
like communicable and non-communicable diseases have been faced by humans and some diseases like pandemics
had
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able to erase the majority of humans from the Earth.
As a result
, to face these health-related
problems
,
governments
spend millions of money on
studies
. To illustrate
this
, during the current
corona
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coronavirus
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pandemic , most
governments
around the world have spent a lot of money to develop vaccines and ultimately it
had
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prevented the death of millions of lives.
On the other hand
, some
governments
and private companies are more interested in other research subjects like new
energy
sources
and solar systems, mainly focusing on the business and future development of mankind. Since some communities around the world are already feeling a shortage of
energy
sources
, these kinds of
studies
are
also
important to overcome the future demand .
For example
,
according to
the World Bank report in 2019, by 2040 fossil fuel will be an end and to overcome the shortage of
energy
requirements,people need to think about new
energy
sources
. In conclusion , even though some people believe in spending money on non-medical researchers to overcome
problems
like
energy
sources
in the future , prioritising medical
studies
will prevent the extinction of mankind from the planet
earth
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.
Hence
,
this
writer wishes to opine that , we must prioritise medical research rather than other
studies
.
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