Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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some parts of the community argue Linking Words
on
conducting scientific Change preposition
that
studies
only limited to health-related Use synonyms
problems
, another group oppose Use synonyms
this
by suggesting research on other subjects. study on subjects like the solar system or new Linking Words
energy
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sources
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are
important to the evaluation of mankind but, to prevent its extinction from the earth , Correct subject-verb agreement
is
governments
should Use synonyms
be
prioritised health-related Unnecessary verb
apply
studies
.
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To begin
with , since ancient times several health-related Linking Words
problems
like communicable and non-communicable diseases have been faced by humans and some diseases like pandemics Use synonyms
had
able to erase the majority of humans from the Earth. Wrong verb form
have been
As a result
, to face these health-related Linking Words
problems
,Use synonyms
governments
spend millions of money on Use synonyms
studies
. To illustrate Use synonyms
this
, during the current Linking Words
corona
pandemic , most Correct your spelling
coronavirus
governments
around the world have spent a lot of money to develop vaccines and ultimately it Use synonyms
had
prevented the death of millions of lives.
Wrong verb form
has
On the other hand
, some Linking Words
governments
and private companies are more interested in other research subjects like new Use synonyms
energy
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sources
and solar systems, mainly focusing on the business and future development of mankind. Since some communities around the world are already feeling a shortage of Use synonyms
energy
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sources
, these kinds of Use synonyms
studies
are Use synonyms
also
important to overcome the future demand . Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
according to
the World Bank report in 2019, by 2040 fossil fuel will be an end and to overcome the shortage of Linking Words
energy
requirements,people need to think about new Use synonyms
energy
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sources
.
In conclusion , even though some people believe in spending money on non-medical researchers to overcome Use synonyms
problems
like Use synonyms
energy
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sources
in the future , prioritising medical Use synonyms
studies
will prevent the extinction of mankind from the planet Use synonyms
earth
. Capitalize word
Earth
Hence
, Linking Words
this
writer wishes to opine that , we must prioritise medical research rather than other Linking Words
studies
.Use synonyms
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