Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Presently, fossil fuels are deteriorating

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nature as well as increasing traffic jams as most

cars

use

such

kind of energy. Some people believe the most effective way of dealing with

this

issue is ascending the price of petrol. I completely agree with

this

idea and

also

consider

improvement

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of environmentally-friendly public transportation can

also

be helpful to tackle

this

problem. There exist various factors why high cost of the petrol can be a resolution of these issues.

First

of all, people will be forced to find other ways of commuting to their work and study once the requirement of driving a car is too high. What

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is that the increased cost of fuel and gas will not be affordable for

majority

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the majority

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and

this

will be a big deterrent

of

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cars

as well as exhaust fumes they emit.

As a result

, car-producing companies will stop making

such

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of

cars

and start the production of electric automobiles which will not create any threat to the environment.

Additionally

, governments should

also

apply other solutions to eradicate

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problems. One of the best ways can be promotion and enhancement of public

transports

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. Once

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petrol becomes costly, states should be able to sustain

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needs of the citizens. In

such

cases, electric buses and trains ought to be available for everyone in order to minimize the traffic and contamination of

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nature caused by private

cars

.

Therefore

,

betterment

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of other means of commuting can

also

play

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role to rectify the dangers of pollution and traffic

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. In conclusion, some people, including me, reckon soaring the price of petroleum can help considerably to solve the negatives of

this

product.

In addition

to

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,

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of other types of green transportation can

also

alleviate the negatives of fuels as they do not pose any environmental dangers.