ou have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in an Australia. For someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter the couple, in your letter: explain why you think you would be suitable the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

Dear Mrs and Mr Jason, I am writing to you in reference to the advertisement that you have published on 21st January in the Job Seekers magazine. My name is Shima and I graduated in Persian language and literature. I have been teaching many foreign students for12 years by the end of the

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, I have just spent 3 advanced courses in relation to the newest methods of teaching

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I am strongly believed that I am qualified for

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job. In view of a 6 -year experience of being baby sitter, I can take care of your

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and entertain them with recreational activities which are relevant to their ages. The main reason why I am keen

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occupation is that I love

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and I really enjoy spending time with

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, to tell you the truth, I am going to continue my study at PhD level. Since I am middle class and honestly I can’t afford the cost of my education

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I need to save money. I hope to hear a positive response from you. Yours sincerely, Shima Dehdasht

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Mar 16, 2022

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