Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective.

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Air pollution is one of the biggest threats to our environment and
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to solve
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issue some think the rise in the
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of
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is one of the measures that can be taken in order to control pollution as well as traffic.
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, In my opinion,
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is an effective measure but for a short period of time, there are some other measures that will be more effective in combating
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problem. People consume
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or diesel on the daily basis for commuting purposes especially from their workplace to home.
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, the increased fare of
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will affect their monthly budgets and after a few
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they will demand from the
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to decrease the
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.
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,the rise in the
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of
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engenders inflation. Because the increased price of
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directly increases the prices of other things like food, clothes and other amenities.
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,
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week Albertans experienced a rise in the
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of gas by 30 cents per litre that
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affect the
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of other amenities and now all Albertans are demanding from the
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either to decrease the price of gas or to increase the minimum wage so that they would not face imbalance in their monthly budgets.
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, there are some other solutions that can be taken which will be more effective in the long term in solving
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issue. The
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should encourage people through various programs to
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public transport because it is cheaper than using their own vehicle.The more people will
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public transport, the more they will save and
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there will be less traffic on the roads. Another measure is promoting cars and buses that run on batteries. As the burning of fossil fuel is the main reason behind air deterioration
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with the
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of cars and buses that
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batteries could help in maintaining air quality. A real-world example of
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would be in Japan, where the
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has subsidized those types of vehicles that run on batteries to save our environment from pollution. To conclude , it is the responsibility of every human to take an oath not to
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things that could contaminate our environment. In
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,way we can protect our atmosphere and the mother earth from being contaminated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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