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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a conventional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It would be argued that
people
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 are not interested in leading their lives following their traditional culture these days anymore.
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, some believe
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 is not the case;
people
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 still prefer to follow their ancient customs and
tradition
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.
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 it's better to keep one
tradition
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 alive, I think that Globalization and technology have impacted
people
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's lives and culture and made them modern by saving their
time
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. On the one hand,
people
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 still follow their old customs and
tradition
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 because they feel more comfortable and convenient following them. In many customs, women still prefer to wrap and cover themselves from top to bottom in traditional clothing rather than wearing a modern outfit like jeans and tops because they feel safe and secure.
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, sick
people
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 still need to use their traditional home remedies recommended by their forefathers rather than take medical advice.
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, the new generation is not inclined to adopt the old school traditions because they are digital natives and technology-dependent which is potentially responsible for the disappearance of old traditions from their living.
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, young
people
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 are keen to play online ludo games rather than playing in person. In my ,opinion Globalization has a tremendous impact on
people
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's lives and changes
people
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's perspectives and behaviour by providing
people
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 more choices.
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, in the olden
days
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 the green chillies sauces were made in pestle and mortar, which took a hefty amount of
time
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 but tasted delicious, now
people
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 use machines to make the same sauce though the taste of sauce gotten lost but saves
people
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time
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.
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, I believe in today’s competitive world
time
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 is precious and need to be used wisely rather than spent on preserving the old culture and
tradition
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. In conclusion,
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 it's better to respect old traditions, it is
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 imperative to keep up with modern times with technology and Globalization.
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