Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population. This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city areas as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted. Give some reasons why this growth has occurred and suggest some practical solutions to this problem.

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growth is one of the twentieth-century's most concerning issues that has resulted in the expansion of major

cities

around the world.

This

expansion has been accompanied by being more crowded, an increase in the different types of pollution, and the subsequent decrease in the settlers' quality of life. A great number of reasons are being suggested by experts to explain

this

extravagant growth. The following essay will overlook two of them which are proceeding by one solution.

To begin

, big

cities

have always been viewed as the best

places

to find the best options.

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services have always been provided in the major metropolis of a country for the

first

time.

For example

, not only are the hospitals being built in the big

cities

first

but

also

the

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advanced treatment options are being introduced in those hospitals before other

places

.

Consequently

, it is reasonable for people to immigrate to those regions to have

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better access and better lives.

Moreover

, job opportunities with higher incomes are much greater in those areas. To illustrate, a newly graduated student might not find a career in a small town unless there was an empty spot for his or her field and even might be forced to work in other fields while that person will find work related to his or her education more probably in the capital city.

This

means that people have more inclination to move to big

cities

after trying hard to be graduated. Despite the above-said reasons, the solution is feasible. The government as the most responsible authority of a country should intervene. The most workable solution is to invest and encourage

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private companies to invest in small

places

by providing reliable industrial platforms.

For instance

, if the government provide social facilities in small towns, the residents of those

places

will not move and the population in those areas will increase.

Thus

, private companies will be encouraged to invest there and job opportunities will

rise

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. To sum up, the major

cities

' population growth is rooted in the access to better facilities and the higher chance of desirable careers'

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. With the intervention of the government and providing the same opportunities in small regions,

this

problem will have been solved by the time it becomes irreversible.