One of the major problems that face today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory houses for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

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In the era of modernization, not only the lack of adequate accommodations is the major problem but
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the pollution environmentally is deserved attention too. There are methods that help
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find a solution in building enough satisfactory
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while they must not devastate the
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. In
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essay, I will give you some methods to tackle
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problem.
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, Individuals' demand for housing is higher and higher make
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must pay attention to building more
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so that their
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can get enough places to stay and work.
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, in modern society, there are more styles and shapes of housing that
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must innovate the architecture of housing to make it more modern and meet the needs of
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.
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, there are some slums in their country which existed from 2 to 3 decades ago so that
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must eradicate slums and innovate them to the modern accommodations which their
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can upgrade the standard of living and the countries can be more beautiful.
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, The
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can be polluted because of deforestation to get wood to build
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. If
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build more
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to meet the needs of
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that can raise the air pollution, noise pollution. It can affect directly ecosystems that the decline in tourists can make the countries' economy go down .
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, if
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could build concrete jungle that does not affect
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, they could protect the
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and it could attract more tourists to visit countries. But it is so difficult to do that, so
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must choose either
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or upgrade their cities. In conclusion, solving the housing problems is as important as the protect the
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in the condition of the increasing population in the world. In my opinion,
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should tackle
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problem as soon as possible and avoid making negative to the society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • major problems
  • satisfactory houses
  • increasing populations
  • protect the environment
  • strain on
  • housing sector
  • sustainable
  • eco-friendly housing
  • efficient
  • resources
  • technology
  • affordability
  • accessibility
  • considered
  • collaboration
  • government
  • developers
  • communities
  • crucial
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