When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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developments and enhancing gyms or shopping centres has become a controversial argument in the
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of planning a new city. Personally, I believe that both of the mentioned factors are important for
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to spend their
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in and it is a two-sided sword. Anyone hand shopping centres are right all
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both the economy and enjoyment. Many businesses are dependent on trading and
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people
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need to be able to fulfil their needs.
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, if a city does not have a good shopping centre,
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will have to go to another town to buy a dress or an umbrella which may result in dissatisfaction.
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, shopping is not just about buying but it is
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a good
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and place for
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to hang out. It may increase the chance of buying because studies have shown that happiness positively
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trading and gathering around with friends in malls is likely to make
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enjoy.
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, public parks and sports facilities would play a key role in citizens' lifestyles and health. Pastimes in nature should have a great impact on mental health.
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, spending
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in public parks with a lot of trees and grass would help
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to breathe fresh air which boosts their mood.
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, residents can do sports
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as running in the parks or attending a gym.
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might confront the sedentary lifestyle of today's world.
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, if the majority, especially the workforce, remain healthy and motivated,
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city
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see fast progress. In conclusion, I think green areas and sports facilities positively affect the citizens' lifestyle but shopping centres are just equally important.
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, I would argue that one of them
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more important for a new town.
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