Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling if for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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insufficient household
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recycling and the only way to increase it is that the government should implement
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legal action regarding that matter.
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will understand and know the value of waste reprocessing and it will provide the safety of the environment. The community will have a realization and interest
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materials.
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, if the law is implemented society will be
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enlightened
enlighten
about the real
senario
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scenario
of our planet and perception regarding the importance of recycling
garbage
. It will
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serve as a
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and
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awareness
of the community especially for
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because they can see that the older people
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following it.
For instance
, my niece saw my mother doing the segregation of biodegradable and non-biodegradable for it was
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mandatory in our village, causing her for being aware that it should be separated. Another factor to consider, law mandate is made for various reasons and one of them is to provide the safety of our
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. Government is well aware that
garbage
is one of the many reasons that our planet is suffering
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.
Thus
, making legal
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requirements
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about recycling must be imposed.
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as well as
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,
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is polluted with an
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enormous
plastic waste product that makes the sea creatures awful experience. In my point of view,
government
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should have
legal
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mandate about
garbage
reprocessing because it will make the people weigh the worth of waste reprocessing and most important
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ensure the protection of the environment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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