Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Economic

improvements

are seen as the most significant means of

development

by

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important number of

governments

. While, some individuals believe that there are other ways of progress, which are as important as

economy

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the economy

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. As a citizen, I believe that

governments

should focus on different subjects related to

future

improvements

equally. It seems like money has the most critical place for the

development

of

countries

; because, without decent financial support, goals for

country

development

may not be achieved and the

country

may lose their gunpower.

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sector is a power source for other areas like education or a powerful army. Without

this

support

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the related branches may struggle and cannot develop.

Furthermore

, insufficiency in gunpower threatens the

future

of the

country

. And, without a

future

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no

improvements

can be done.

Nevertheless

, the structure of the

countries

and

governments

are more complex than

this

. In a strong

country

with

avaliable

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available

power for

future

improvements

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all different parts should be supported equally.

However

, the

economy

seems the most important part it has many subdivisions related to other subjects.

For example

, computer or mobile phone export is a major source for the United States,

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because

this

country

supports scientific research which has significant importance on economic progress.

Furthermore

, human rights and different ideas should

also

be supported, which is at least as important as

economy

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the economy

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.

For instance

, many

well educated

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people immigrate from

countries

with huge economies, like China or India, to places with smaller economies, like Europe.

As a result

, without the support of those people

countries

like China or India struggles with economic

development

. In conclusion, the

economy

should be well supported;

however

,

governments

must see the importance of other subjects like science or human rights on

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financial progress.