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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.

#countries #people #history #house
Nowadays,
people
some
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 countries are
increasing
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 interested and curious
in
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about
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 the story of households or the building in the past, which
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where they
wherethey
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 live
in
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today.
This
 essay will explain some of my ideas reason.
First
 of all, the houses or
building
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buildings
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 nowadays are have several styles. There is inspire
people
 to decorate their house, which means contribute
people
 to curious where are those
architecture
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 styles from.
Such
 as
,
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Greek-Roman
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Greek
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the Greek
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 Roman style, which had almost full of white
color
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 on the building and line
designare
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design are
 very unique.
In addition
, building materials are
also
 interesting,
for example
, more than 100 years ago,
people
 who lived in that era were used wood or brick to
built
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 their houses.
Furthermore
, today the vintage staffs
such
 as
,
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jewelry
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,cars, and
also
 including old houses, which are unique design. These are the valuable price getting increasing now, which means if who are interested in
oldo
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old
bjects
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objects
 is exactly know the detail and story, it is might help those
people
 earn benefits.
However
, nowadays it is easy to
finding
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 and
learning
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learn
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 a source of households background.
For instance
, from
internet
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the internet
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which
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apply
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is they can
searching
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 on
internet
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the internet
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 with a
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keyword
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key word
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.
In addition
, books are
significant
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 source as well. There were have several
writer
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 to wrote histories with
a particulars
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particulars
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.
Moreover
, they are able to ask
old
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an old
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adult
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adults
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 who used to
lived
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 in that location area
in
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back
then
. In conclusion, today is the proportion
people
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of people
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 who are interested in
history
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the history
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 of accommodation increasing rapidly and there are easily certain ways to access what
people
 are curious to
finding
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 the truth.
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
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  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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