Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think students should spend time on important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, despite

subjects

in the

school

, there

are

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a lot of

study

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studies

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that should be explored by

student

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students

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. People argue that students should

also

focus on

life

skill

study

such

as the

science

of

food

and how to make it. While others believe that there is no more beneficial

knowledge

than essential

subjects

in

the

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school

. From my perspective, education should become a foundation for students to face their daily

life

in society.

Therefore

, in

this

essay, I would explain both of

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arguments.

To begin

with, having an ability to cook and

knowledge

about the

science

of

food

,

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is crucial for everyone since it is a basic

life

skill

.

As a result

, students should learn and practice

this

study

to survive.

For example

, I am grateful because I have never faced difficulty when I should live alone and far away from my home. It is because when I was

child

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, my mother

tought

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taught

thought

me about the basic

skill

of cook and my elementary

school

teacher

also

taught me about what kind of nutrition

food

is.

Nonetheless

, learning

school

subjects

is

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also

important since nowadays,

subjects

in

school

is

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related to the type of occupation in

job

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market. It

also

can help us in

many

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any

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aspect

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aspects

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of our

life

.

For instance

, learning basic mathematic

knowledge

can help us to calculate and manage our

financial

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.

Also

, learning English can help us to

boarden

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broaden

our

knowledge

and relationship with others. In my opinion,

these two perspective

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in education is right. Everyone should not only have basic

life

skills like how to cook, but

also

should have academic

skill

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skills

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.

However

, sometimes, it depends on a person’s

life

goal. If someone

want

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to be a researcher or teacher, they should put their concern in academic

skill

, yet if an

individu

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individual

want to become an expert in how to manage

a

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healthy

food

or want to become a

profesional

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professional

chef,

then

they should learn more in the

science

of

food

and how to practice it. To conclude, I believe that every

knowledge

is beneficial for

life

. Yet, I

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convince

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that it would be more essential if we learn and practice both,

life

skill

study

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studies

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, like the

science

of

food

and academic

skill

.