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Some people say that school children should study history as a main subject. Others think that others subject are more important for children in modern society. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

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Several people claim that
history
 should be the main subject for
children
 in school, whilst
other
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others
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 believe that in
generation
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the generation
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 today, other
suject
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subject
subjects
are
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 more important. From my point of view,
history
 should be valued,
however
, there are some instances that
children
 should learn other than
history
.
This
 essay will explain both scenarios. On one hand, being aware
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 culture is a key factor to ensure that
children
 will appreciate their heritage.
Moreover
, making
history
as
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the prime subject for learning will
benefits
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 the future because they will realise the importance and value the worth of the preserved
history
.
For instance
, the historical places in various nations, learning the background more of the said place will acknowledge the value of culture.
On the other hand
, in the modern world we live today, there are other important
subject
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 that youngsters should be
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 on because they need to go with the flow and see what they need in order to survive in our society.
Moreover
, life is a process that
require
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 and adapt what is
infront
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in front
.
For example
, soft skills
such
 as decision-making,
team work
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 because it is vital in our daily living. In conclusion, learning
history
 is essential for which the
children
 learned and value the worth of preserved
history
, whereas other subjects are more important because for daily survival.
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